Services
How it works.
SCRIPT ANALYSIS PROCESS
01
You email me your script, confidentially (happy to sign an NDA).
02
I read it (a lot), then write notes, which I edit (also a lot).
03
I email it back to you.
04
You read, write down any questions.
05
We chat in depth + high five at a job well done.
06
You go your own way to make it even more awesome.
07
You make your film, sell your script, or assess and go again for another draft.

Choose your service.
Coverage
$750
I’ll thoroughly read your draft and give you:
A 1–3 page synopsis of highs, lows, strengths, weaknesses, where it could improve, and more.
And meet with you for 1 hour to discuss.
Story Analysis
$1,500
I’ll read your draft 2–3 times and give you:
A 1–3 page synopsis of highs, lows, strengths, weaknesses, where it could improve, and more.
A couple hundred inline notes that consist of:
What’s working well
What’s not there yet
Basic suggestions
Ideas
and more
And meet with you for 2 hours to discuss and hypothesize ways to move forward.
Regardless of which service you’re interested in or if you’re just wanting to learn more, schedule a 30-min Google Meet. I’ll address your questions, share some high points, and the goal of the analysis.
Full Story Analysis
$3,000
I’ll read your draft 4–5 times and give you:
A 1–3 page synopsis of highs, lows, strengths, weaknesses, where it could improve, and more.
Many hundreds of inline notes that consist of:
What’s working well
What’s not there yet
Basic suggestions
Ideas
and more
And meet with you for 3 hours to discuss and hypothesize ways to move forward.
*– The main difference between this and the regular script analysis is time spent in the script. More time allows for more understanding and insight, as well as more time to refine the notes, so typically double the amount of time.
Other Options
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With the changing tv landscape in the last few years, scripts can be any length, so we’ll discuss your script but more-or-less it’ll be a price scale corresponding to the amount of pages within your script.
Similarly, we can discuss how much will need to go into your short based on its length. I want you to feel excited about the cost corresponding to what you’re asking for (i.e. a 3-page script is vastly different than a 33-page script). -
If you’re looking to get more thorough structural story analysis to try to steer a current project in the right direction, we’ll see what your project is and how I can help.
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If you have a script that needs to be rewritten, I’m happy to come in. I’ve done this a few times and really enjoyed it.
What your notes will look like.
Green: good/great stuff
Yellow: general comment, question, and/or suggestion
Blue: bigger structural issue
Typical percentage of types
of notes per script.
Green: 10–21%
Blue: 3–7%
Yellow: 65–83%
Red: 4–12%
Purple: <1%
Red: omit
Purple: random/silly
