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How the flow works: 

SCRIPT ANALYSIS PROCESS

01
You email me your script, confidentially (happy to sign an NDA), telling me where you are and what you need help with.

02
I read it (a lot), then write notes, which I edit (also a lot).

03
I email it back to you.

04
You read, write down any questions.

05
We chat in depth + high five at a job well done.

06
You go your own way to make it even more awesome.

07
You make your film, sell your script, or assess and go again for another draft.

Story Analysis

An In-Depth Look at What You Get

I’ll read your draft 4–5 times to thoroughly understand your story and how it’s showing up (and not yet showing up) on the page. In addition, you’ll get:

  • A 1–3 page synopsis of highs, lows, strengths, weaknesses, where it could improve, and more.

  • Hundreds of inline notes that consist of:

    • What’s incredible

    • What’s working well

    • What’s not there yet

    • Structural analysis

    • Basic suggestions

    • Ideas to fix things that aren’t there yet

    • And more

  • A few hours to meet to discuss and hypothesize wise ways to move forward with your story.

Regardless of which service you’re interested in or if you’re just wanting to learn more, schedule a 30-min Google Meet. I’ll address your questions, share some high points, and the goal of the analysis.

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Other Options

  • With the changing tv landscape in the last few years, scripts can be any length, so we’ll discuss your script but more-or-less it’ll be a price scale corresponding to the amount of pages within your script.

    Similarly, we can discuss how much will need to go into your short based on its length. I want you to feel excited about the cost corresponding to what you’re asking for (i.e. a 3-page script is vastly different than a 33-page script).

  • If you have a script that needs to be rewritten, I’m happy to come in and understand the story well, then do a draft or lock arms with you for a go at it.

Let's Chat About Your Unique Project

What your notes will look like.

Green: good/great stuff

Blue: bigger structural issue

Yellow: general comment, question, and/or suggestion

Red: omit

Purple: random/silly

Typical percentage of types
of notes per script.

Green: 10–21%
Blue: 3–7%
Yellow: 65–83%
Red: 4–12%
Purple: <1%

I love doing consultations and have time for a couple each year, so I’m typically looking for people to befriend and good stories to help. If you’re interested, let’s chat.

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